The Bet

It has been stupid of Ryo to compete against Yamapi in the undeclared drinking contest. It has been sure from the beginning that he would end up losing. Yet he couldn’t resist when his best friend ordered every time a drink more than him again and again. When Yamapi could still stand straight and sing a super-sweet love-song-duet with cute Tegoshi Ryo already laid on the sofa babbling shit and embarrassing stuff.
(could you please write this full karaoke-scene, when you find the time for it? I guess that would become a very cool oneshot...)

KYAAAAAAA! Big fluffy sheeps!!! =3 I love sheeps!!!

“Where is my little sheep? Tessheep, where are you?” (Muhahahar, poor Tego...well, with little white woolly sheepears... =3!!! (My little nice has such a cap. So cute...) And Ryo is the mean big bear...UWAAAA!!!! Kopfkino, bad bad Kopfkino! What is Pi then? Fox? Maybe Kitsune...anyway I love that scene...^^)

Impossible…he thought. It’s like trying to move a cow…I’ve never once moved a cow… (nice picture^^)

“Well” Tegoshi sat down on a sofa next to the closet. “You drank a lot, made Shige cry, teased Yamapi, sang some songs I just know as songs sung at funerals, then you talked a lot about how you would win the heart of somebody you love – by the way who is she?”
Ryo shrugged his shoulders, looking as ignorant as he could. Tegoshi continued: “Then, as we were about to leave, you screamed as if you would be killed and ran into the women’s toilet, so I had a hard time to bring you back safe. And then you blabbed a lot about sheeps and you nearly knocked me out with pillows and I thought you were going to rape me with you wide scaring grin…but no, you didn’t do anything bad.” The iron(i)y in Tegoshi's voice was un[m]istakable.
(hehehehehe...could have been worse, deshou?^^)

“And why the heck are you torturing Ryo?” Shige wanted to know, looking at him, because he still sat on Ryo’s back.
“You all talk today like I am fat~” Tegoshi claimed and all four of his members laughed. He even pouted more.
“It’s my punishment for being mean to him.” Ryo explained to them with a wide grin. He didn’t see it as a punishment at all, but he didn’t see a reason to tell them that either. You really could spot the light bulb above Shige’s head as he answered: “Oy, that means you have to piggy-back at least one of us the whole time!”
“As if I would carry you, baka! Tesshi is heavy enough.”
“Hey, holy crap! I am not heavy!”
(hehehehe =3)

[rafe = rage?]

Poor Tego...

“Konnichi wa~” he greeted the waitress and the rest of NEWS followed him. She got huge eyes and blushed as the six good looking guys stood in front of her and ordered a room. Especially when she saw Ryo piggy-backing Tegoshi. Quickly she ran and looked for a free karaoke room.
(guess if I were in her place I would have a hard time moving at all, just standing there starring at them...)

“We can see your underwear.” Shige said, when Tegoshi lifted his hands up as far as he could. Yamapi and Ryo risked a naughty gaze and Koyama chuckled. “Woah, Tesshi, it’s pink!”
(That moment I seriously asked myself whether he got it from Pi before reminding myself that THAT would be very unlikely or at least kind of odd...)

lG Jani-chan

O.O How could that happen? I went over to the next chapter wondering while starting to read why I got the feeling to have missed some context. So I went back to find that I accidentally skipped their arrival in Nagoya... *baka deshou :( *

“So, here are the keys for our honey-moon-suite.” He said as he swang the card for their room in front of Tegoshi’s nose.
“Ho-Honey-moon-suite?” he said and blushed. With widely opened eyes he stared at Ryo who burst into laughter. “Just kidding!” he chuckled and patted Tegoshi’s back.
Yokatta~, Tegoshi thought and sighed in relief. I really thought for a moment – Ya! Don’t think about it Tegoshi! He scaled himself as he shook his head like a cow. Ryo smiled to himself as he saw that scene. “You really are cute, ne~” he said and watched Tegoshi’s pouting. “I am not!”
“You so are!” Ryo insisted, poked Tegoshi’s still blushed cheeks and then went ahead.
(Ryo is sooo mean...I like it^^. I guess teasing Tego would be indeed a lot of fun... *wanna try...*)

“It was my pleasure.” He replied, bowing down like a butler for the queen, and looked at the bed.
(Queen Yuya? *ggg* Not quite sure if that would be a good idea though)
Actually it was two single-beds that were moved together as one. “You really don’t have a problem with that?” Ryo asked with lifted eyebrows. He was worried that Tegoshi might step back after all.
“No, not at all. It’s not like you would rape me or something like that, deshou?” This time Ryo was the one blushing and quickly turned around as he saw Tegoshi’s innocent looking puppy-eyes. “Haha. As if I would do something like that. Hehehehe…” Oh shit, he said to himself. Yabai yo~ This was dead on…
(Hm...*ggg* are you writing such scenes sometimes? I mean not espeacially rape, but...don't know, Ryos dreams or something like that?)

Have to admit that they are cute together too...but I'll go for TegoPi...^^

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW =3, I love the busscene. So cute. TegoPi...

“Oh, there they are!” Massu shouted suddenly and Tegoshi twitched. “Mmmh?” he made and lifted his head. “Doko?” he asked and rubbed the sleep out of his eyes. “What happened?” He looked completely lost as he scanned the van, before he realized, where he was.
“You fell asleep.” Yamapi explained and moved his shoulder, which he didn’t do all the time Tegoshi slept in order to not wake him up.
“I did?”
“Yup.” Yamapi smiled at Tegoshi’s confused face. His hair was all messy and he didn’t seem awake at all.
(*totally excited desu* so kawaii =3)

Poor Tego. Why doesn't anyone help him? As you wrote later, at least Koyama noticed, that something was going on, or didn't he at that point yet? Well, maybe he is also too distracted by Shige.)
(Is Tego kind of sarcastic sometimes? (I have to admitt that I don't know them that well...^^°)

Great Chapter...(like the others too, of course)
lG Jani-chan

Tegoshi chuckled. "Sure. I don’t know what’s so complicated about that question, but that’s no problem at all. Of course I will share a room with you."
"Hontou?" Ryo-chan whirled around, his brightest smile on the lips.
"Mh. You know I hate lies. And why should I lie to you right now?" Tegoshi laid his head to the side. "You’re happy now?"
"Super happy!" Ryo answered and bore with the desire to jump up. "So it’s settled?" He still couldn’t believe it.
(*ggg* awwww, so cute! The whole scene... and Tego is so unbelievable innocent in the following one...damn cute written.)

I like the idea, that he has already fallen for Pi, before your plot starts. Makes it more complicated. But he seems to be a good actor to hide it all the time while he's with the oder NEWS-members...

"I hate me because of this" he whispered and turned onto his tummy so he could dig his head into his pillow. He so wished to cry out everything, cry hard out and then maybe even feel better. He so wished…But he couldn’t. He simply couldn’t. The risk was too big. It would be more than he could endure if it would be his fault w[h]en NEWS, his best friends, would live in awful uncertainness because of him.
(Awwww, T.T so mean...)
("awful uncertainness"...I like the diction, for it's one of the main topics in the story.^^)

lG Jani-chan

"Pretty good, Pi!" He shouted and pointed at a picture, where Yamapi sat on a Brownie, holding a big Lollipop behind his back and looked like a caught kid. Ryo-chan threw a gaze at proudly grinning Yamapi, who said: "Thanks, but yours are good too, ne?"
(MEEEEEP, I really wanna see that pic =3...you don't intend to draw it, do you? *puppyeyes*)

Ryo-chan threw a gaze at proudly grinning Yamapi, who said: "Thanks, but yours are good too, ne?"
"I know." Tegoshi answered and Ryo chuckled.
"Self-conscious as always."
Tegoshi turned around and gave his sweetest smile to both Yamapi and Ryo. "That’s why you like me, ne?" He joked, not knowing that he hit a risky point.
(Hehehe^^)

Little Tegoshi felt uncomfortable between them. First: Yamapi was taller than him, what wasn’t bad, but made Tegoshi feel so tiny. Second was Ryo-chan’s face, doing the killer-smile. And last but not least: of course Tegoshi felt the tension between the guys and he really wished to not be there, where both Yamapi’s and Ryo’s power collided.
(Oooooh, poor Tego. Know that feeling. Don't wanna switch with him.)

"I love Tegoshi more than you do!" Ryo-chan teased and grinned at his best friend, who pouted badly. "I love him more!" Yamapi said and fixed Ryo-chan’s eyes. "His cute baby-face. His soft hair. His adorable smile, his skinny shoulders, his laughter and how he calls me 'Pi-chan'"
"I call you like that too." Ryo-chan lifted his face. "But I love his round puppy eyes as well. And his sweet blushing cheeks, when he realizes that he did something wrong and wants to cover it up. I love when he tries to be funny and to catch everybody’s attention."
(Kindergarden...yay! ^^ I love this scene..Awwwwww...but the bet is completely not right. Bad Alcohol...)

lG Jani-chan

First I wanna say how much I love this story. I have read all 19 chapters so far, though I can't comment at Livejournal, what I am really sorry for. But if you continue to upload at animexx be sure I will read it again and write one for every single chapter. Your writing style is gorgeous and the plot as well. I would prefer TegoPi but I'm very curious to get to know your solution of the triangle.

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All six guys put on their shooting outfits and checked their hair, though Tegoshi had to do it three times, because Yamapi and Ryo-chan had pretty much fun ruining it every time Tegoshi just had it done.
(I also want to ruin his hairstyle...well, who wouldn't want to do so? *g*)

Immediately Massu ran to a big choco-cake twice the size of him. "I am in my wonderland~" He mumbled and rubbed his cheeks at the big plastic cherry at the bottom of the cake,... (kawaii, his total admiration for food is kind of stange, but never the less very, very cute (or cuticle, like Aiba would say *g*)

"Can’t help me, but I really want to hug him, when he looks like this." Was Pi’s respond and looked at Tegoshi’s jolly, smiling face.
(me too, me too! kyaaaa =3)

(Fangirling is something very awfull, especially for everyone around...but never the less fun, isn't it?^^)

lG Jani-chan

By the way, shall I comment in english or german?

tolle ff *_*
bitte schreib weiter ><
es ist grad so spannend *-*

Und hiaaa~
Bitte lad weiter hoch
*anbettel*
XD
Deine FF ist momentan so mein Langeweile Killer und es macht wirklich Spaß sie zu lesen
*strahl*

So.. jetzt komm ich dazu auch mal weiter zu kommentieren XD
Ich finds echt schade, dass kein anderer hier Kommis gibt.. ich hoffe, dass es zumindest leute gibt, die das hier lesen..
Ich freue mich immer unglaublich auf die nächsten Kapitel ^^