Charade: Illusion perfect Act 1/1

hi sahra. you have to go on writing. this story is beautiful. it's one of the best english digimon-fic i've read. pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase! i'm very excited how it goes on in the next chapter. have to agree to cassiopeia. when you write your stories in english you should use a dictionary when you don't know a word. and let check the fic on spelling errors. good for this is "Word". try it out. it will make your stories more easier to read. and more fluent.
danni (taichi (my fic-name))*werbungfürmeinegeschichtenmach*
and please go on writing!!!! don't forget.

hi sahra
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nice story but you've used some german words in your fic
(nich das ich mich beschweren will...aber wenn schon englisch dann richtig zur not gibts noch wörterbücher;-])
ansonsten ganz hübsch